Hello everyone!
Short and simple, I'm looking for a talented story writer to help with plot development for my game.
I'm unable to move the story from point A to point B, why? I'm not exactly sure, I lack creativity I suppose.
You can find information about the game here...
Revelations
Basically the game is about the end of the world. It's heavily based upon the Book of Revelations in the back of the Bible.
I've got some ideas, but like I said, I'm unable to move the plot forward.
If a talented story writer would like to help, I'd be very grateful!
Thanks for reading,
Kool Dude!
You could maybe tweak that for a title otherwise do a Google image search on revelations background or something, that's how I got that one.
For your plot ( sorry kinda didn't see this thread or I would have posted earlier ) you kind of already have a good basis, try getting the most interesting stories on revelations ( might mean reading the bible alot ) but also don't make it over demonic as that becomes cultist.
An idea I have with Athan ( you main character ) is you can make him have his own motives e.g in order to gain his soul back from Lucifer, he offers him a deal. That deal could be to destroy gods army or whatever but Athan isn't nessesarily evil or good he just wants his soul so you could have him either betray lucifer and steal his soul or work with him. Like in the spawn series, he's given a second chance but he has to lead hells army and spawns a bad ass he sometimes saves innocent and other-times dosn't give a shit. Maybe whenever he dose something he gets good energy or evil energy. God can also give him back his soul on condition that he kills Lucifer or something and vise-versa. You might want to cut your game into chapters if its too long.
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