would you guys reply and tell me what you think of my story/ plot
Story:
The first part of my game will take place 100 years ago in the year 2038 where a spellcaster casted a spell to release his master known as the Dark General from the pits of Darkness where he was imprisoned at. Now that he’s back he can wreck havoc on the world once more with his dark army. Now the question is where Stryder blaze went. Who will be able to stop this dark general from plunging the world into everlasting darkness. Who is the hero going to be to rid this world of evil beings.
The plot for the first part of my game will take place where the spellcaster casts a spell to release his master from his imprisonment in the pits of darkness. The hero’s will come later in the game .
What is the general's motive? Also, why was he imprisoned, and who is the spellcaster to have broken him free? Who is in his dark army, and who would want to be?
If it were up to me, I would try to come up with something else, because there are plenty of "Save the World" stories, most don't turn out to be that good. The best ones also don't tend to be based entirely on saving the world, but more on trying to save yourself and those around you and get dragged into a plot that only the villain wanted. And the villain HAS to have a motive. Otherwise it's unrealistic.
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